Made some minor edits to 1.3, around lines 38-42 (cleared with prof. Davies) Wanted to make sure the audience knew why Antonio was kicking his son out the next day...
Lots of elisions, and a few scan-wonky lines. Turning a conversation into a soliloquy is my greatest challenge in this scene. I'm especially looking for points of audience contact, and there's a bit of erotema and anaphora that should help me out.
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